the Monchy storY

Hiyee, ok, i decided that it is a bit boring to write about everyday life, so i have created the...ta-da Monchy Story! this story is basically about chimpy, monkey and their friends. pls write comments about this story to me and perhaps give me some ideas. i will take them seriously and hope that it will become a fantastic novel in the near future!
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Chapter 1

It has been a long day, chimpy was staggering down the zoo corridor to her cage with her fellow friends after a long day's training for the up-coming zoo festival. Their big fat obnoxious trainer, Stevey hurried them along with unreasonable waves of the whip. One of her fellow act partner, chiono, stratched her butt, gave a big yawn and complained.

"This is so unfair, why must we train so hard just for the homo sepians to see and laugh AT us? This is crazy, animal liberation! And what's worse? WE primates always have to train harder than the rest..."

"Don't complain..at least we are not like clomio's cousin, Zenia who works at the genetic engineering institution for land animals. He really suffers a lot you know..poor guy, heard that he just lost his sight due to some medical experiment-"

The conversation about animal liberation ended when Stevey gave chimpy a hard whip on her already injured back. The exuasted animals dragged their limps all the way back to their domitary. As they tucked in to bed on the branches, Chimpy gave the issue of animal freedom another thought before drifting asleep.
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That's it for chapter 1, chapter 2 will be about an accident that happened the next day during the training for the zoo's up-coming annual performance. rmb to come back for more and please give me some comments=) ciAo~